Thursday, February 28, 2008

Ek Mulaqaat !!

Aj main Zindagi se mili

Pareshan thi , bheed men phasi thi ..uljhi uljhi si thi
Maathe pe uske lakeeren khichi thi mano keh rahi ho ki
Thak gayi hoon waqt se ladte ladte .
Saanse kuch fasi fasi si thi uski , shayd khul ke hasna chahti thi ..
Maine rokna chaha ussey par ruki nahi who ..
jaldi mein thi thoda ..phisalti chali gayi

usko yuh dekh ke aankh bhar aayi meri ..dam ghutne sa laga
mai ek gehri saans ki talash mein nikal padi.

Aaj mai Muhabbat se mili...

Muskuranyee woh mujhe dekh kar
Par aankho mein kahi koi dard chhupa tha ..
Shayad phir raat bhar woh soyee nahi thi !!

Chahre ki raunak kai sawalon mein kho gayi thi
Waqt se shayd kahi who bhi haar chuki.thi

Baar baar mujhe dekhti thi par khamosh ho jaati thi
Ansoo tham chuke the shayad ya sailab abhi aana tha.

Bas ek muskurat thi halki si mano keh rahi ho ki ..”khush rehna “
Uski is phiki muskurat ko mai dil mein dabaye aage badh gayee
Jawaab dene ke liye mere pass bhi kuch nahi tha kahi.

Soch mein doobe kadam mere kheech le gaye kahi
Nazar utha ke dekha to bachpan ki galiyon mein khud ko kahad paya.
Waqt bahut guzar chukka magar phir bhi, kuch bhi nahi badla tha wahan

Mai wahan YAAD se mili

Bahut khush thi .. chehak rahi thi
Kuch chhote bachho ke sang nange pairon se daud rahi thi

Mujhe dekh kar khilkhila ke hasee,
Boli ..aaj phir aa gayi tum mujhe dhoondte hue
Is taraf !
uski hasee uski aankhon tak pahuch rahi thi
maine pehli baar phir us din ghehri saans liya.
Maine yaad ko gale lagaya to palke nam ho chali meri.


Meri khushi ko dekh ke woh ekpal tak pujhe dekhti rahi
‘Boli saath hoon mai tumhare hamesha ‘
Lekin yeh bol ke phir un baccho ke peeche daud gayee.
Aur un galiyon mein lukka chhupi ke khel mein kho gayee.


Shaam ko lauti kamre mein to TANHAYEE intezaar kar rahi thi mera
Bas sirf uske pass hi hai waqt mere liye shayad
Maine ussey bataya apne is mulaqat ki dastan
Aur who khamosh ho kar sunti rahi mujhe ……

14 Comments:

Blogger asjad said...

Hummmm…lagta hai kuch phatne wala hai…take a deep breath n release d pressure…or go to d remotest agony tree n scream…
Gar mohabbat muskura di to tanhai ke aghosh me bhi zindagi khushgawar ho jaegi…kuch aur yaaden jud jaengi…kuch aur gahri saanse li gaengi… ;-)
keep writing dear...its always gret to read u...

6:46 AM  
Blogger ambyrocks said...

Thanks Asjad.
but let me tell you something about this piece that i have written ... its not latest ..infact its my first piece of writing ever . and i wrote it nearly one n half yrs back. so you can see the rawness in the writing . its very clear .

but yes i did pick it out after ages and made quite a few changes ..added some feelings. and thats how i took the mental pressure out . no agony tree ..just penning the feelings helped.
would recommend it to all.

8:44 PM  
Blogger Fire in the hull said...

amby...if words could ever come close to thought or feelings then probably they just did...

8:47 PM  
Blogger Amol said...

I thought so.. I have read this before, but it did sound a bit different... and well as always I admire the way you write... par yeh khudka photo kyun laga diya uske saath :P

5:21 AM  
Blogger ambyrocks said...

I uploaded my pic coz i changed my look !!... u missed ita mu ..eekks ..how could you . i invested so much time n money for this new look :p

Thanks Fire in the hull ... but can i plz know your name ..i mean i dont remember this id .. cross checked all my orkut friendlist. but i remember reading this name ..fire in hull !
kaun ho ??

10:14 PM  
Blogger Fire in the hull said...

amby i am disapointed..you forgot...tsk tsk...o god..y am i living still

11:28 PM  
Blogger ambyrocks said...

u are living still to tell me your name !! :D

BUT THANKS AVINASH .. NOW THAT I KNOW ..LET ME tell it to others. issey pehle ki tum fayda uthao .

12:16 AM  
Blogger Fire in the hull said...

damn...hmmm..will have to change my name i say

12:29 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Think you are turning out to be my favourite poetess these days. Woven the memories of life very maturely. Keep writing, pleasure to read your compositions.

7:27 AM  
Blogger Fire in the hull said...

nahiiiiiiiii...yeh kaun hai

3:30 AM  
Blogger Dips said...

nice work amby..look forward to more
:)

12:46 PM  
Anonymous Furry said...

nice nice... kuch cheezein bouncer thi.. but certainly a gud piece :D

10:44 PM  
Blogger ambyrocks said...

thanks dips, furry and anonymous(naam to batate plz.
will try not to disappoint you guys in future .

1:32 AM  
Blogger Megha said...

nice piece of writing:)

11:50 PM  

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